Revisions to Progress of Technology
I used the midst of action intro for my actual introduction for the paper.
If you can't read it, it is mostly my alternate introductions, a midst of action introduction, and an outline of the major points of the paper.
The Force of Fiction Revision
Didn't use any of the introductions I wrote, but this helped me decide that I actually liked how my paper started.
Tech and Warfare Revision
This one was shorter, so the midst of action introduction made up the entire draft, though I think in the end I'll add more before it's due.
2 comments:
i also wrote for tech and warfare. i thought it was a very interesting topic.
i found it interesting how you think a satellite could be a super weapon. what kind of shielding are you talking about? the fictional shield we know of? or like armor plating?
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